From Tracie: Color

Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Color

Sarah didn't need the tinkle of bells on the door to announce his entry; she sensed his presence immediately. As she turned, color abandoned her face. She whispered through clenched teeth, "Get out."

Trifecta Writing Challenge
Trifecta Prompt:
color (noun)

3: complexion tint:
  a : the tint characteristic of good health
  b : blush

38 comments:

  1. This leaves a lot of questions. Nice Hook!

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    1. Thanks! I am a long writer, so I like challenging myself to hit the 33 word minimum exactly.

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    1. I have some ideas for Sarah and the mystery man. ;-)

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  3. Wait, you're going to stop there? With such a cliffhanger?! *dies* Awesome piece!

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    1. Thank you!!

      My goal was to hit that 33 word minimum, but I do have plans for Sarah.

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  4. Great twist. When I started reading it, I was thinking it was a 'good' presence, like a crush or something like that. The anger of the last line surprised me.

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    1. Thank you. I love so much that it surprised you.

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  5. Ooooh! Well done! ... Now write a book! LOL!

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    1. Thank you! :)

      Sarah's story is running around in my mind - but for a book, I have a story that has been percolating since I was about nine.

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  6. Aw come on Tracie - did it have to be so short? (grin)

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  7. Nice job! You captured a heck of a lot in those 33 words.

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  8. Oooh, cool entry! Love the tinkle of the bells.

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  9. The detail of the bells grounds it nicely.

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  10. I always get a little thrill when you show up in our linkz. Thank you for this.

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  11. Such loaded emotion packed into just a few short words--leaves your mind reeling and creating the story around it--great job!!

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  12. There's a lot of emotion in these few words. I'd love to hear more.

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  13. Sometimes 33 words is exactly enough. Intriguing...

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  14. Concise, efficient, disciplined. A story well told... and a hunger left for more

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  15. So much said in so few words! I loved it!

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  16. Whoa!Sarah seems ready to fly off her handle-he better be ready:-)Great take on the prompt & loved the suspense.Waiting to read the rest of this(sure to be) fantastic tale ,Tracie:-)

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  17. my mind feels like a pinball in the directions you've taken it in so few words

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  18. Excellent and with the minimum words. I'm in awe. Congratulations on a well deserved win!

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  19. Oooh...me want more of this story.

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